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LF: Slow write


Today, I would like you to choose one picture from The Window book and complete a slow write. You are excellent at this in school and I am sure you will be just as good at home. Follow the instructions below to complete your paragraph that describes the picture. Remember to edit your finished paragraph. 




Sentence 1 should contain a fronted adverbial

Sentence 2 should contain a preposition

Sentence 3 should contain a simile

Sentence 4 should contain a list

Sentence 5 should contain alliteration

Sentence 6 should contain an embedded clause (you can choose the parenthesis)

Sentence 7 should end with a rhetorical question.


Make each sentence as detailed as possible using adjectives and descriptive language. Enjoy!