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Thursday 4th February

LF: To edit and improve my writing.


Today, I would like you to edit and improve your work.  You need to check:


  • Spelling
  • Grammar
  • Punctuation


Check you have punctuated direct speech correctly. You may wish to add a subordinate clause, a fronted adverbial or an expanded noun phrase. Can you replace any tier 1 words with tier 2 words? 


Once you have corrected all of your marvellous mistakes, choose a section of your writing to improve. Remember, if you would like to re-write a sentence, you can do this on a separate piece of paper and stick it over the piece of text you have chosen to edit.