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Thursday 4th February

LF: To edit and improve my writing.

Today, I would like you to edit and improve your work.  You need to check:


  • Spelling
  • Grammar
  • Punctuation


Once you have corrected all of your marvellous mistakes, choose a section of your writing to improve.  You may wish to add a subordinating conjunction, a fronted adverbial or an expanded noun phrase.  You can re-write this on a separate piece of paper and stick it over the piece of text you have chosen to edit.  Remember, if you are correcting an error, simply put brackets around it or cross it out neatly with a ruler.